• 4movecheckmate

    I’d say just practice it more, make it more fluid. The words themselves are good, though.

  • Ryan ODonnell

    Great job! Here is mine if you want to check it out http://grantcardonetv.com/video/perfect-pitch/ryan-odonnell/
    I’ll get you TWO votes if you give mine one, and comment saying
    you did so (with a link back to your video.) Be sure to hurry I am only doing
    this for a few days 🙂